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The Whispers in the Walls

  • Writer: fictionalfables
    fictionalfables
  • Nov 9, 2024
  • 8 min read

The Whispers in the Walls
The Whispers in the Walls

It started with the sound. Soft at first—like a faint rustling, a delicate scratching from the other side of the wall. Claire tried to ignore it, chalking it up to the old house settling. It was a historic home, after all, built in the late 1800s, with creaky floors and groaning beams. But as the days passed, the noise grew louder, more distinct. It wasn’t just the house shifting—it was something else, something that seemed to breathe, to move.

She’d moved in a month ago, a fresh start after a bad breakup. The house was perfect for her: secluded, quiet, and full of character. The walls were thick, the windows large, letting in generous amounts of sunlight. She imagined it would be her sanctuary. But that sanctuary began to feel like a cage.

At night, the whispers would come. Low, guttural voices that seemed to emanate from the walls themselves. Claire would lie awake, her pulse quickening, listening to the soft murmurings. The words were indecipherable, but the tone was unmistakable—urgent, pleading, desperate. There was something hungry in those whispers, a need that crawled under her skin.

It wasn’t long before Claire noticed something strange. Every time the whispers began, the temperature in the room would drop. A chill that crept along her skin like icy fingers, and no matter how high she turned the thermostat, it never seemed to warm. Then, the shadows—dark, shifting shapes that slithered along the edges of her vision. At first, she thought it was her imagination, a trick of the light. But after a few nights, the shadows became impossible to ignore. They would appear near the corners of the room, moving with a life of their own, stretching and recoiling as if they were alive.

One evening, the noise was different. Louder, more insistent. It wasn’t a whisper anymore. It was a clear voice, a broken, hollow sound that called her name.

“Claire…”

She sat up in bed, her heart racing. The voice was coming from behind the wall. The wall of her bedroom, the one that separated her room from the attic space.

“Claire… come closer…”



The voice was so soft, yet it carried a weight of sorrow, of something long buried. She hesitated. A part of her wanted to run—to grab her things and leave this cursed house behind. But another part, the curious part, the part that couldn’t resist a mystery, urged her forward. She got out of bed and stepped toward the wall.

The whispers swelled as she approached, a chorus of voices now, all overlapping, all begging her to come closer. She placed her hand against the cold plaster, her fingers trembling. The surface was smooth, undisturbed, but she could feel something pulsing just beneath it. Something waiting.

In a moment of madness, she pressed harder against the wall. There was a soft crack, and the wall shifted.

The room grew colder.

Claire stumbled back, her breath coming in short gasps. The wall had opened, a small section of it sliding away like a door, revealing a hidden space. It was a crawl space, barely big enough for a person to fit, but in the dim light, Claire could see something—a shape, a dark form curled at the far end of the narrow room.

Her pulse thundered in her ears as she crawled closer, her hands brushing against something damp and sticky on the floor. It was a smell that made her gag—sour, rancid, like rot. When she reached the shape, she gasped in horror.

It was a body. Or what was left of one. The skin had withered away, shriveled and blackened like a carcass left too long in the sun. But it wasn’t completely lifeless. The eyes—empty, hollow sockets—still stared at her, as though they could see. As though they were watching her.

And then, from somewhere deeper in the shadows, came the voice again.

“Help me…”

Claire scrambled backward, her heart racing. She tried to pull herself out of the crawl space, but her limbs were shaking too violently. She was trapped—trapped in this suffocating room with the dead.

The whispers rose to a deafening crescendo.

The body in the shadows twitched.

Claire felt a cold, clammy hand grab her ankle, and she screamed, trying to pull away. The hand tightened, dragging her back into the dark. Her vision blurred, the room spinning as the whispers filled her head, louder and louder. The voice now screamed her name, a twisted wail that tore through her mind, drowning out all rational thought.

“Claire… help me… help me…”



Then, everything went black.

When the neighbors came by the next morning to check on her—concerned about the strange noises coming from the house—they found Claire’s room empty. Her bed was undisturbed, but there were strange marks on the walls. Scratches. Deep gouges, as though something had been clawing at the plaster from the inside.

They searched the house, but there was no sign of Claire. No sign of a struggle. It was as if she had vanished without a trace.

The whispers continued, though.

And in the deep, hidden space beneath the house, behind the thick walls, the thing that had been waiting began to stir once more.

Days passed after Claire’s disappearance, and the house at the edge of the village remained eerily quiet. No one dared go near it—not after the rumors spread. The locals whispered about the strange happenings, the cold spots, and the odd occurrences in the house. People had always been uneasy about the place, but now it seemed more than just a relic of the past; it felt… alive.

But the house wasn’t empty. It was never empty.

Two weeks later...

Detective Aaron Hayes stood outside the house, his breath visible in the early morning mist. The air had a chill to it, one that wasn’t entirely from the weather. It was the kind of cold that seeped into your bones, making you feel as though something unseen was watching you. Something old.

He had been called in to investigate the disappearance of Claire Daniels after the neighbors reported strange sounds coming from the house—noises they couldn’t explain, even with the wildest theories. Aaron was a man of logic. He’d seen his share of unsettling cases, but something about this one was different. The hairs on the back of his neck stood on end every time he thought about Claire and the way she had vanished—without a trace. No sign of struggle, no evidence of foul play. Just a gaping hole where she had once been.

The door to the house creaked open as Aaron stepped inside. The interior smelled of dust and decay, the air thick with a sense of abandonment. Everything was just as Claire had left it, her belongings scattered around as though she might return at any moment. The photographs on the walls were slightly crooked, the edges of the frames clouded with years of neglect. But there was something… wrong. The silence in the house was unnatural, as if it was holding its breath, waiting.

He walked down the narrow hallway, feeling the weight of the old wood beneath his boots. His flashlight beam flickered as he approached the door to the attic. It was an odd place for a young woman to disappear, Aaron thought. If she’d gone up there, surely someone would have heard something. And yet, the neighbors had been strangely quiet about any sounds at all, aside from the whispers they’d heard late at night.

Something about that disturbed him.

The attic door groaned as he pushed it open. The temperature dropped immediately, the chill seeping into his skin like ice water. As he stepped inside, his flashlight swept over the cluttered room—old furniture, boxes, and discarded belongings. But there was a corner, a small alcove at the far end of the room, that caught his eye. The shadows there seemed deeper, thicker, almost as if the darkness had weight.

Aaron moved toward it cautiously, the beam of his light trembling in his hand. As he approached the alcove, he heard it—soft and faint, like the rustling of paper. But no, it wasn’t paper. It was… breathing.

His stomach churned.

“Claire?” he called, his voice trembling slightly, though he hated himself for it. He was a seasoned investigator—he didn’t get nervous, not even when he was searching abandoned houses in the middle of nowhere. But something about this place unnerved him. The whispers, the cold… they were real. He could feel them in his bones.

The breathing became heavier, raspier, as though something was drawing nearer, something unseen. Aaron’s flashlight flickered again, and when it came back on, the alcove was empty. There was no one there. Just the remnants of long-forgotten objects, draped in dust.

But something was wrong.

He crouched down, eyes scanning the floor. That’s when he saw it—a thin, jagged line etched into the wood, leading to the wall. At first, it appeared like a crack, but as he examined it closer, he realized it was more than that. It was a groove—something had been digging into the floor.

He reached down and ran his fingers along the edge of the line. It was deep, as if something had been clawing at it from below. The sensation of coldness, of being watched, grew unbearable. His heart hammered in his chest as he followed the groove to the base of the wall.

His breath hitched when he noticed the subtle shift in the wall itself. It wasn’t smooth like the rest of the room. The texture was different here—slightly raised, like a door hidden beneath the plaster.

I need to know what’s behind this. The thought was a command, urging him forward, despite every instinct telling him to leave.

His hands shook as he pressed against the wall, and with a slight push, the surface gave way with a soft grinding sound. The hidden door slid open, revealing a small, cramped space beyond—just enough for a person to fit. The smell hit him first—a putrid, acrid stench that made his stomach turn. It was so overpowering that he almost recoiled, but something kept him rooted to the spot.

The beam of his flashlight landed on the floor of the crawl space. What it revealed made Aaron’s breath catch in his throat.

Bones.

A pile of skeletal remains lay in the center of the room, scattered and piled in an almost ritualistic pattern. But the bones weren’t just human—they were animal as well. Rats. Dogs. Something larger. The remnants of countless creatures, their broken bodies twisted and entangled, as if they had been dragged into this dark space over years, even decades. Atop the pile was something else, something worse—a dark, twisted figure, almost humanoid in shape.

Aaron stepped closer, his heart pounding. The shape appeared to be crouched on the floor, as though it had been waiting for him. He could see the outline of a face, hollow and gaunt, with empty, black sockets staring back at him. There was a movement, a slight twitch, from within the mass of bones. The creature’s head jerked up, and its mouth opened.

It wasn’t a scream. It was a whisper, but so deep, so guttural that it seemed to vibrate in his very chest.

“Help me…” the voice croaked, thick with desperation, but there was a hunger beneath it. A terrible hunger.

Aaron’s flashlight dropped from his hand as he stumbled back, panic surging through him. His feet slid in the dampness of the crawl space, and he tripped over the bones, crashing to the ground. The whispering grew louder, surrounding him, pressing in on him from all directions.

“Help… help me…”

The walls seemed to close in around him, and in that moment, Aaron realized—he wasn’t meant to leave. The thing that had been buried in the walls of this house had been waiting for someone, something to wake it. And it had chosen him.

Before he could react, the cold hand of the creature wrapped around his wrist, its grip icy and unyielding. He tried to scream, but the sound was lost in the suffocating darkness.

The last thing he saw was the figure emerging from the pile of bones, its face twisted in an expression of pure malice as it lunged toward him.The next morning, the house stood silent once more.

Detective Hayes was reported missing by the local authorities. His last known location: the abandoned house at the edge of the village. His flashlight and personal items were found scattered across the attic, but there was no sign of him. No trace.

The whispers continued, echoing through the walls, calling to the next.

And the house waited.


THE END

 
 
 

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